mondrian:
all the things that made Jacobs a great assistant for Hergé, made him an average storyteller on his own.
I wouldn't entirely agree - I think it's the meticulous detail in the drawings that makes B&M so distinctive and is a large part of the appeal for me.
I do agree with you about the text though - far too much description, most of it unnecessary. The concept of "show don't tell" never quite hit home with Jacobs.